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Asymmetrical

i'm off today.
not quite right, if you know what i mean.
just off balance,
                                                off kilter.
the wrong kind of images
keep running through my brain.


i'm just feeling
                              asymmetrical,
and not in the good way.

i've got no rythme left inside
my mind is askew.
my mental capacity
                it's not right.
think i'll go crawl back in bed

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  • Lady Eventide
    September 27, 2007

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    Cool! Definitely love the layout of this piece...and the emotion I get from it as well.

    Good job.

    Kudos.