I feel like tearing myself apart.
From the inside out, or maybe, the outside in.
I don't care, as long as I'm done with myself.
I want to rip at my skin with my fingernails.
Destroy every bit.
I hate who I was and who I've become.
It seems no matter how I am I will always hate who I am.
I'm sick of this life, I just want it to be over.
Should I cut the green wire, no, maybe the black, no, the red.
Red always means self destruct.
That is exactly what I am doing to myself.
[self destructing]
Author notes
Random thought.
probably withdrawals from my anti-depressants...
Please tell me what you think
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i like this poem. i relate to every part of it, but especially the lines "I want to rip at my skin with my fingernails/destroy every bit", as I have hurt my skin with my fingernails and "I hate who I was and who I've become/It seems no matter how I am I will always hate who I am". I just can't seem to ever find a way in which I actually like myself. Great write!
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thank you, sorry haven't signed on for a while, but I'm glad you liked it.
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*drools*
i used to be the same way. in my poem unhopeful, it says, 'to live a harmful life.
no, i dont think i will think twice.'
i htink thats how you are feeling, if i read this right. hun, you cant just be somebody by not doing anything, you have to make yourself somebody.
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thanks. I've changed a lot since I wrote this poem, so, I am better now. But thanks for the advice and comment :]
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great write.
i like the way its as if you were talking to your self
its crazy but a good touch. i have wanted to just rip
myself open before i wanted to clean everything in side me. [as wired as that sounds] then stick it all back in and maybe then i would be a better person? i dont kow but this was a great poem keep up the work.
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thanks so much : ] I wrote this during a crazy time, so I guess that's my inspiration...haha, anyways, thanks.
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wow. i feel like this 99.9% of the time love this poem, how its writn, everything bout it.
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I'm sorry that you feel this way so often. Thanks so much for the nice comment. If you want to talk to someone message me or something : ]
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wow this is powerful... i like the part about coloured wires, its like comparing yourself to a bomb and that very effecitve imagery and metaphor.
very strong write, it would be great with just a little editing, just to work out some grammar and stuff.
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thanks for the comment and the suggestions. much thanks : ]
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WOW. Very very well written.
I love love love line 4... Very nice imagery... Seems pretty brutal and I love it!
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thanks so much for commenting, always appreciated : ]
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i like this poem. its like BAM! when you read it.
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haha. thanks : ]
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wow.. great poem!
"It seems no matter how I am I will always hate who I am."
i can relate... i love it!
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thanks so much : ]
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this is so pretty.
i love it,
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thanks :]
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