By your lips
lie my way
my only reason,
to stay on earth.
I don't care if my days are darkned
or under a neverending storm
as long as i know
that your part of my day
nothing can go wrong.
For one more kiss,
may thing i would do,
for your love,
nothing would be impossible
To makes things better
you gave me my chance,
at first thinking i was dreaming
but then, i've realise that everything
was true.
Now i'am living in a dream
growing on the cloud
but afraid of the fall
Please don't let me fall
Author notes
Well, my first positive poem ,lemme know your opinion
A contest entry
- Our Story by SincerelyMegan.
475 points, ended March 10, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This poem gives me the sense of
absolutely needing the only thing
on earth that could possibly needed (whatever that need is)
I like the simple imagery.
All in all I really liked this poem!
Good luck. -
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I'm glad you liked it young miss
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very good one dude..really liked it keep it up haha its not bad so there
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it's far from being great, bu thnks anyway
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