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Your Last Words, No Rose


Nothing perfect can be
like the sun’s early rise
and the moon’s goodnight kiss
with the stars whispering
never was our love meant
to exist beyond
smiles, kisses, bliss.

Before I let this slip away
I realize that this time
it was you
to fall for me
but I didn’t catch you
instead I left you there
left your heart to rot
at my feet.

Ice my fortress
for a cold, evil [bitch]
is all I can claim to be
for that is the name
you imposed upon me
when I ignored your
begging manor, demanding
you leave me alone
-I
  don’t
        love
  you-

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  • C.c
    September 24, 2007
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    wow

    this is excatly how i feel about some stuff.


  • WulfDiamondLou33
    September 23, 2007

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    i love this!!! i really really wish you would put a back ground on this poem but besides that i love it. i am fighting with somthings in my heart right now so i can relate to this poem.

    DIamond (sorry for spelling)