I know that I will always
Miss you for the rest of my life.
I Know that you won't come back...
Still I wish,
Still I pray I'll see
Your wonderful face
Once more!
Underneath the beautiful sky!
Author notes
eh, I tried my bestest!
A contest entry
- Missing / Longing in 5 lines! by Beating.
600 points, ended October 8, 2007, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I really like this, and the way you talk about the beauty out in the open, underneath the beautiful sky. Pure harmony!
However, the point of this contest was to write 5 lines. No more. So unfortunately, I can't consider you for the contest. -
this is way good i really liked it keep it up
*~*bee*~* -
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thanks.
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