Evening passed and morning came
Here began the blackest day!
September, September, pass my by
Bring me cold October sky
Pass away to first five moons
And let me live the sixth day noon
Hear O season, dragging on
Fade to black until you’re gone
Let the month of changes end
So we can meet again, dear friend
Beneath the soft October stars
We’ll find that place that’s truly ours
And in those moments of sweet love
We’ll see the future we’re dreaming of
We’ll live the life we’ve planned to do
When two years pass and this is through
And let us make precious memories
Of the sweetest first anniversary
~*~
Author notes
He's gone! Not forever, thankfully! But for now he's gone away! I'll see him on October 6th but that's too far away! hehe, nah it's not too much to handle! It'll be 5 days after our first year of being together and so it'll be a wonderful day! I hope...
Anyways, that's what I'm saying in this poem. I'm basically begging september to pass quickly so I'll see him again soon!
Let me know if I need to work on any of this some more! If you have any ideas for better titles they'd be appreciated too, nott keen on the existing one! thanks for reading! take care, Sam (Dreams27) xxx
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- For Love by live in love.
500 points, ended October 9, 2007, 54 entries
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Comments
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really strong emotive language, throughout it has this power that transcends the page and really shows off your writing skills. very effective and efficient in effect and delivery. great effort hun. xxx
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