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autumn



before fall to earth
leaf has last, red-orange thrill
small midlife crisis



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A haiku version of my previous poem:

http://allpoetry.com/poem/2326484

A contest entry

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  • aliceramone
    October 15, 2007
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    lol...very cool imagery in this quick piece...congrats on the green.

  • InBetweenThoughts
    October 1, 2007
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    Thank you for your patience and for resubmitting your poem!


  • HeavenScent4U
    September 30, 2007

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    oh this is wonderful and probably one of the most unique things i have seen here in awhile best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    September 23, 2007

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    Oh, how very clever, Thorin! Fall and the turning of leaves as a midlife crises--excellent. Love the red-orange thrill, and all the consonance with the l's--they're everywhere, man! Great haiku.