before fall to earth
leaf has last, red-orange thrill
small midlife crisis
Author notes
This is a great form of poetry that flows from my thoughts, though the picture I see is greater, I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse- I hope!
A contest entry
- Autumn Haiku by InBetweenThoughts by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended September 28, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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please edit this as you have two of the same I am removing the other as I commented on this already, thanks, Ken IBT
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Thank you for your twisted thoughts
aDefinitely a different outlK! Great entry, best wishes, Ken IBT
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