cooler temperatures
the golden leaves fall gently -
bare branches reaching
Author notes
Love You Tory
"This is a great form of poetry that flows from my thoughts, though the picture I see is greater, I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."
Image © Ian Mitchinson
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A contest entry
- Autumn Haiku by InBetweenThoughts by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended September 28, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Autumn Haiku II by InBetweenThoughts Finalist of previous contest only, http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2370440 by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended October 1, 2007, 37 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you for your patience and for resubmitting your poem!
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well done my dear friend - however im not quite ready for cooler temps as here in iowa it gets toooo cold into our winter months xxx many loving blessings xx
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A wonderful Haiku, as branches do seem to reach as the leaves depart from them...and the relief of summers heat with cooler temps! Thank you for your entry, best wishes, Ken IBT
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beautiful immage my friend!
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i love your haiku's. they always give me a peaceful easy feelin'. this is beautiful, like the time it speaks of. well done Scott.
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