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A Battle

Fleets of fantastic ideas
originating in the
childlike subconscious will
surely overcome a cruel fate.

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Rush rush rush

A contest entry

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  • HeavenScent4U
    September 23, 2007

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    very nice *nods head* nothing like a childlike subconscious, even if it's in an adult with our minds, we can accomplish anything, thing of all of the inventions here today just because someone had a great imagination thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed


  • Griswold silver member
    September 23, 2007

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    Well written for the given prompt, flows well and easy to understand. Best of luck in the contest to you...Scott