A carpet of leaves
no weaver can hope to match--
fashioned on God's loom.
Author notes
"This is a great form of poetry that flows from my thoughts, though the picture I see is greater, I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."
A contest entry
- Autumn Haiku by InBetweenThoughts by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended September 28, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Autumn Haiku II by InBetweenThoughts Finalist of previous contest only, http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2370440 by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended October 1, 2007, 37 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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what beautiful visions this inspires
this was outstanding beautiful. be well and be blessed
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How true, we are all fashioned by a higher power and often we forget just that. This haiku highlights how insignificent we actually are in the light of day. Excellent and many congratulations on the "Gold"
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Thank you for your patience and for resubmitting your poem!
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Thank you for your patience and for resubmitting your poem!
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very original and very beautiful. i love the touch of god in there. seems like people are afraid to mention him much anymore
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Thank you, Lady, for your kind words and I'm pleased you like my piece. I enjoy the haiku format, though I don't write many of them.
Cheers,
Bill
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Very Unique!
Great imagery and wonderful thoughts, thank you for your entry...best wishes, Ken IBT
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