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Amazing Light

my morning star,
Shining down on me,
infinitely bright
comforting from afar
my everlasting gift
of true happiness
your pure soul
enlightening my life
with compassion and grace
passion shining within
our hearts of trueness
Eyes mirroring our spirits
through windows of our being
our love, heaven sent
Hand in hand, you and I.
Together, meant to be
for eternity



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  • Namita
    September 27, 2007

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    Beautiful, this comes from the heart and soul. Thank you for your piece of blissful sensuality.

    Luv,
    ~Candy


  • thepoetssoul
    September 24, 2007

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    This is an amazing piece of poetry.
    I really love the wording and imagery
    Great heartfelt words indeedBRAVO!!!
    Best of wishes to you

    Tony


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    September 23, 2007
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    Amazing Piece!!!

    Good luck in this contest!!!


  • PerfectImperfection
    September 23, 2007

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    A very beautiful piece of love and light. Wonderfully serene description and thought woven within. Nice write!