you kissed me
lips raw, petal pink
pressed to mine
fervently
blood boiled, ran wild
under our lips
warm fingertips
traced the shapes
of skin stretched over our bones
and above us
in the pale morning sky
the clouds swelled softly
full of our secret
as we lay smoldering
entwined, tender
renewed
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie ~ Sensuality by Namita.
300 points, ended September 27, 2007, 13 entries
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Comments
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Beautioful write, wonderfully expressed. Great penning. Good luck.
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awesome =)
the wording is great, you wrote it perfectly... well done =) -
I like this poem
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this is very good. i love how u worded it. keep up the awesome work.
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