pebbles line creek bed
cobalt in cranberry thrush
topaz crepe blanket
Author notes
"This is a great form of poetry that flows from my thoughts, though the picture I see is greater, I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."
*I changed the titling of my two entries to match more with the haiku form, as it is originally intended to be the first line of the poem.*
In a list
A contest entry
- Autumn Haiku by InBetweenThoughts by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended September 28, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Autumn Haiku II by InBetweenThoughts Finalist of previous contest only, http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2370440 by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended October 1, 2007, 37 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pimp up my honorable mention or trophyless by leander.
400 points, ended December 4, 2007, 86 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Haiku do not need capitals or punctuation, but do like the images these words bring to mind.
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Thank you. I appreciate the much needed critique. Kind of wish somebody/anybody had told me that beforehand..
*slapping forehead* hahaha lol..
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This is such a lovely presentation, background, sidebar and colors used. Liked this haiku - lots of info in these three lines.
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This is actually quite complicated for a haiku
I always thought a haiku gave two images and then an AHA-moment, but obviously I hsould have broaden that thought 
Very beautiful imagery you have captured in this one actually.
Thank you for entering the contest - I wish you the best of luck!
Leander -
Beautiful imagery...
I am without words at how good this haiku really is. Bravo!!
Knight70
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Love this. I love the use of vivid colours.
Lady Dragonwyck
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another brilliant one by you and both in the same contest again congrats on the HM. be well and be blessed
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This is beautiful and a perfect haiku. You painted an image of color, nature and brought in the human factor of the blanket. Well done!
Love,
Amera♥
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Wow this is very visual indeed. It is amazing how you can paint such imagery with so few words. Great Haiku. Good luck in the contest.
Jeannie
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Nice, I love to go to the creek, especially this time of year...wonderful images penned Thank you for your entry...best wishes, Ken IBT
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