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The Feast (Haiku)

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Bramley apples fall
hidden from sight in deep grass
birds sharp eyes feast well




Author notes

"This is a great form of poetry that flows from my thoughts,though the picture I see is greater,I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."

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  • InBetweenThoughts
    October 1, 2007
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    Thank you for your patience and for resubmitting your poem!

  • InBetweenThoughts
    September 23, 2007

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    Great imagery It reminds me of my own yard with the fallen apples and the different birds about
    Thank you for your entry..best wishes, Ken IBT