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the cold mountain wind

the cold mountain wind
ushers in a new winter
- flowers fall asleep

A contest entry

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  • InBetweenThoughts
    October 1, 2007
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    Thank you for your patience and for resubmitting your poem!


  • HeavenScent4U
    September 30, 2007

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    very nicely written, i love the line "the flowers fall asleep" very nice touch best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed

  • InBetweenThoughts
    September 23, 2007

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    Ahhhh, the coldness of winter in the mountains, enough to make anyone want to sleep great imagery. Thank you for your entry...best wishes, Ken IBT