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Fumigation sets

on table flowers

released to suffering heat

slaved upon season 

 

Author notes

"This is a great form of poetry that flows from my thoughts, though the picture I see is greater, I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."

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A contest entry

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  • InBetweenThoughts
    October 1, 2007
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    Thank you for your patience and for resubmitting your poem!

  • InBetweenThoughts
    September 23, 2007

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    Wonderful, nicely worded great thoughts behind this..thank you for your entry...best wishes, Ken IBT

    • saddie23
      September 23, 2007
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      Thank u

      thank u for the wonderful applaudes and critique. Saddie23