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gently falling leaves

gently falling leaves
swirl around in frisky wind
- nature's playful game

A contest entry

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  • herrlurch
    August 27, 2008

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    The esthetics are breath-taking.
    I'm just quite new to this three lines-stuff; actually, I came across your page looking for poems on Iceland.

  • InBetweenThoughts
    October 1, 2007
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    Thank you for your patience and for resubmitting your poem!


  • HeavenScent4U
    September 30, 2007

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    this is a wonderful haiku for autumn, the more i read the better they get best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed

  • InBetweenThoughts
    September 23, 2007

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    Beautiful enry...I can easily see this coming about as I live in the hills and it is always windy! Thank you for your entry, best wishes, Ken IBT