Copper touches cheek,
strung gently upon long stems.
Thoughts of russet reign.
Author notes
"This is a great form of poetry that flows from my thoughts, though the picture I see is greater, I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."
*I changed the titles on my two entries to better match the original form of haiku* Sorry for any confusion.
In a list
A contest entry
- Autumn Haiku by InBetweenThoughts by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended September 28, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Autumn Haiku II by InBetweenThoughts Finalist of previous contest only, http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2370440 by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended October 1, 2007, 37 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Liked the alliteration in these few lines of this lovely haiku. So any different ways of writing. Seems each host has different rules and ideas, so one never knows what will make the top list. Congrats on the HM for this one.
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this is absolutely brilliant
i don't see what it only has an HM on it though 
congrats in the HM. be well and be blessed
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Thank you for your patience and for resubmitting your poem!
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Stunning
Stunning piece of writing about Autunm here. Brilliant imagery in such a short piece. Your use of words in this is outstanding, my Sister.
Your Brother Always
Wayne
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You are so good at penning haiku! The amber image you created is amazing in the short 17 syllable poem.
Love,
Amera♥
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A beautiful picture of Autumn you have painted, vivid images, thank you for your entry...best wishes Ken IBT
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