red and golden leaves
drop from trees, dance in chilled breeze
robins leave their roost
Author notes
"This is a great form of poetry that flows from my thoughts, though the picture I see is greater,I have summed it up beautifully in such short verse".
In a list
A contest entry
- Autumn Haiku by InBetweenThoughts by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended September 28, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Autumn Haiku II by InBetweenThoughts Finalist of previous contest only, http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2370440 by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended October 1, 2007, 37 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank you for your patience and for resubmitting your poem!
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Excellent
love the scene you have painted, autumn is here and it is time to migrate! Wonderful entry..best wishes, Ken IBT
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Very pretty haiku, with the glorious colors and sights of autumn floating gently with each word you wrote.
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