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the Very Thought of You

THE VERY THOUGHT OF YOU


The very thought of you brings me to my knees
Your sweet perfume captivates me every time
Leaving me lost in a world of sensuality
Perpetual bliss comes over me as you hold my hand

Making me feel so sated, free
You whisper sweet words of love in my ear
I feel like I am walking on a cloud
My heart is complete for the first time

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60 Words
Prompt: Sensuality

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  • Namita
    September 27, 2007

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    Beautifully penned with emotion and love. Thank you for the breeze of serenity and sensuality...

    Luv,
    ~Candy


  • Stardust-luvr
    September 23, 2007

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    well done my dear friend - your words of love and devotion held my thoughts captive as i ended up daydreaming of someone special whom when we speak I feel all these feelings and more. many blessings always xx


  • Olivias Violin
    September 23, 2007
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    Beautiful


  • Lady Eventide
    September 23, 2007

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    Well done! I really could feel the passion in this piece! When love is pure, love is meant to be and one can soar on the back of an eagle way up in the sky without fear of falling...and that's what I felt like while reading this! That the love is pure in this piece! Great job. All the best!