An off-shore cloud bank comes to her
just before dark; no threat of thunder roll
nor lightning strike,
simply a slow slide into her bed
All great poets and songwriters, lovers,
knew how to slip to side
with such silken quiet
I am such a peninsular piece of land;
elbow sharp, belly-rounded to valley known
by many shipwrecks on foggy nights
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie ~ Sensuality by Namita.
300 points, ended September 27, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Such an enchanting piece, poet. Beautifulyl pennned. Great job, just breathtaking!
Luv,
~Candy
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ty and ty for the HM, Candy.
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Breathtaking! What fantastic imagery you include in this gorgeous write! I am completely taken aback by the beauty in this. Just WOW! This stirs up such emotion in the reader while filling our minds with wondrous visuals. Masterfully penned, my friend! Brava!!
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Well, I gave it my best shot at being, but not being, what prompt requres...lol
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Nice job Carol. You tie your poems together so well
with revolving vernacular.
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good morning, Michael Thomas.
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way cool...
very clever
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thank you.
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Sigh is sail to rip in tide
glide to grow in fire panting
word to sliver quiet quiver
of sired blush of soul enchanting
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maybe I am gettin too old for this.
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What an interesting take on the prompt given! I loved how you wrote this. I loved everything about it. The clear language, the vivid imagery, the tone...everything was just so fantastic! A great, great job!
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ty for your kind coment....
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