Holding you softly
my forehead to your chest
letting you bathe
in the wordless energy
of hushed love
soaking the flow
into your being
renewing the essence
of your core
easing the music
in your soul toward peace
gradually raising my
head to see your tear-shined eyes
to share a smile
in reverent hush convey
I’m here for you today.
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie ~ Sensuality by Namita.
300 points, ended September 27, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Show Must Go On Round 1 of 5 by Willowhaunt.
450 points, ended September 28, 2007, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A lovely piece. The description is beautiful, as is the flow of it. I think it matches the background in that it has a very airy, sensual feel to it. Very well written.
Keep Quilling,
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Interesting logo...
just read something on that this afternoon, thanks for the feedback. P.
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Beautiful, you've captured sensuality in very few words. Beautifully penned, poet.
Luv,
~Candy
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thanks KK...and for the flower
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You portrayed such strong feelings with your words. Good luck in the contest.
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thank you for your comments...
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I think this is one of my favourite of yours.
so feminine and sensual.
I really like this one
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lovely energy in this poem.
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thanks so much for your comments...
I appreciate your stopping by.P.
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You captured it
Words that express a deepest felt wordless love here at it's most intense moment. Very well put.
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*sigh* thank you
more later...hugs P.
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this is so very beautiful! good luck in the contest! take care, Sam (Dreams27) xx
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thanks...
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my dear friend a wonderful entry filled with much love and passion well done and many blessings always xx
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perhaps there is no keeping the passion out of pure love
must be an inseparable combination, thanks
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not seperable when the love is infinitely true
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'tis infinitely true indeed...
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Aww! Wow. This was really beautiful. SO FULL OF PASSION! I really think you did good in this contest, since this is so sensual, and that's what KK is looking for. We went in the same direction. But, of course, where else to go with sensuality? Good job. All the best!
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Why thank you very much...
must be repressed passion seeping through, I was trying to be very subtle...*smile*
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