Wist away without a thought
Fear appeared from what is brought
Passions ablaze but lie reserved
Given pain though much deserved
Escaping reality in threatening ways
Destruction brought on by mind numbing haze
Bound by ones own humility
Empowered to participate in futility
Life will sting without a reason
Just as certain as the coming season
Comforts seem to be so distant
As a shooting star's only there for an instant
Author notes
College Thus far....having a hard time adjusting
A contest entry
- Un-do the emo cliches by AutumnsFlame.
791 points, ended November 4, 2007, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~*Teenage Drama*~ by Rachel21.
327 points, ended September 29, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~*(~*~(~*~PRE WRITES OK!!!!!(~*~(~*~(SOMETHING SAD.....HEART TUGGING.....SOMETHING FULL OF FEELING.....NOTHING GROSS PLEASE!!! NO GORE THATS NOT SAD!!!! by xxlisajazminexx.
425 points, ended October 1, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This was pretty good.... I was disappointed you didn't put a background on this poem though.... Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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Wow i loved this poe i tottally understand the way you feel i can relate to this a lot Great job and when i say great it is GOLD
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nicely written!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
love the rhyme and thank you for entering into my contest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -
this is a nice put together poem, makes me feel sad. thanks for entering
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