raking mounds of leaves
gold and scarlet dreams ablaze
God's painted artwork
Author notes
"This is a great form of poetry that flows from my thoughts, though the picture I see is greater, I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."
A contest entry
- Autumn Haiku by InBetweenThoughts by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended September 28, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Autumn Haiku II by InBetweenThoughts Finalist of previous contest only, http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2370440 by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended October 1, 2007, 37 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank you for your patience and for resubmitting your poem!
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this is beautiful, so visual, paints such a great picture. best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Yes God has his way with his paintbrush!
you have described his painting well...and love to rake leaves! Thank you for your entry, Best wishes, Ken IBT
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Beautiful work here!
It's true that God puts his amazing hands
and creativity to work during this magical
season. Well done and good luck to you!
Jeremy0826
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