curled russet debris
swept away in biting wind
gardening hat lost
Author notes
This is a great form of poetry that flows from my thoughts, though the picture I see is greater, I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse.
A contest entry
- Autumn Haiku by InBetweenThoughts by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended September 28, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Autumn Haiku II by InBetweenThoughts Finalist of previous contest only, http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2370440 by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended October 1, 2007, 37 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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with the exception of the time of year, this reminds me of an easter when i was a wee child and had my easter hat on, the wind kept blowing and it came off and i chased it for 2 blocks
congrats on the HM. be well and be blessed
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lol...this is a cute and funny poem.I can just picture your lil' hat sailing away on the breeze!
you have a way with words my friend. I really hope you've found a new hat now,I have a few i could send you, if i could remember where i left them, you know what its like.
(good to see you back)
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Don't you hate that! Nothing like enjoying yourself outdoors and whoosh off goes your hat! LOL..thank you for your entry...best wishes, Ken IBT
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Unusual author's comment. I detect satire; you are a modest man, as I recall. But you shouldn't be; this is a stunning little poem. You have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse. I feel the flow of your thoughts and see your greater picture.
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well done - i can just visualize you chasing after your hat all around the yard many blessings always xx
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