Tumbling, twisting,
Sunset of, curling, leaf, crunch.
Watch for squirrels lunch.
Author notes
"This is a great form of poetry that flows from my thoughts, though the picture I see is greater, I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."
A contest entry
- Autumn Haiku by InBetweenThoughts by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended September 28, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Autumn Haiku II by InBetweenThoughts Finalist of previous contest only, http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2370440 by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended October 1, 2007, 37 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you for your patience and for resubmitting your poem!
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this was very interesting, especially the part about the squirrel's lunch LOL best of luck in the contest., be well and be blessed
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Nuts!!
I've never posted a (an?) Haiku before, very interesting...do I see the same as you? A park with thousand of leaves in their various stages of decay, capturing the Autumn sunshine and scattered among them, the squirrels lunch! Great write, should do very well in the contest...ian.
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beautiful
This is a great haiku..and the ending is fantastic..watch for squirrel's lunch.. you have summed it all up in this short verse.. good luck in the contest
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Thank you for your wonderful entry, vivid imagery
all wrapped up nicely...best wishes in the contest, Ken IBT
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haha, delightful write., despicting the fall.
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this is great,,we just watched coots and moorhens at the pond sweet love it xxp
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