Walls bleed dripping emotions
Haunted by rusty razor blades
Across soft and yielding tissues
Opening fissures of molten agony
Fountaining bloody rage erupting
Textures crack and barriers split
Carve these words deeply into flesh
As your eyes pass over these lines
My blood flows in unfettered rivers
Open your ears and hear my screams
Let my self torture rape your mind
Breath in the metallic taint of my life
It flows to feed the ink of these words
If I faint then send a mental slap
And I will awaken to continue
Till death rips out my wreathing soul
And shows me the true meaning to hell.
Author notes
just having a screwed up day.
Comments
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Dark and very depressing
Words are simply amazing and you can feel the slices of pain.
" Let your self torture rape your mind " sends a mind blowing image!
Julie -
A dark write with so much pain. Great job.
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Well at least your screwed up day produced such a wonderful piece of dark poetry. This was beautiful and haunting and I loved it. The metaphors and the images were something I will be jealous of for a long time.
Great job.
Despair
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I hear you uncle I love you. It is so hard when we have days like this all my love
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