When I look into those Eyes I see
So many possiblities
Nights of untold pleasures wait
When sweat will flow and lovers ache
Goosebumps rise where touch is made
And chills will wind down backs like rain
Forget the love thats lost
And dream of love to come
Passion lives inside our heart
Extended to the touch we give
No holding back no giving in
Lost in all that we both give
Lost in all that we both give
Author notes
Oh what a night it could be.
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A wonderfully written poem, with great use of metaphor and exciting visuals - infusing thought provoking love-making in its finest hour. I loved ths one, but there's just one thing - I'm wondering about "Queen Sheba." You must be rubbing elbows (and other body parts) with royalty these days(!!) LOL
Peace, Cyn


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excellent
Yep, What a night it could be when there is no holding back and two get lost in what they both give. Good to see you writing again! -
Well Charlie my friend you do have a way with words. This was very beautiful. Does make my mind wander afar. So glad to see you writing again. This was quite lovely and yes what a night it would be for two so in love even if only a dream now. God Bless you. Take care, Sandy




