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Queen Sheba

When I look into those Eyes I see
So many possiblities
Nights of untold pleasures wait
When sweat will flow and lovers ache

Goosebumps rise where touch is made
And chills will wind down backs like rain
Forget the love thats lost
And dream of love to come

Passion lives inside our heart
Extended to the touch we give
No holding back no giving in
Lost in all that we both give
Lost in all that we both give

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Oh what a night it could be.

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    September 28, 2007
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    A wonderfully written poem, with great use of metaphor and exciting visuals - infusing thought provoking love-making in its finest hour. I loved ths one, but there's just one thing - I'm wondering about "Queen Sheba." You must be rubbing elbows (and other body parts) with royalty these days(!!) LOL Peace, Cyn

  • June-bug
    September 23, 2007

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    excellent

    Yep, What a night it could be when there is no holding back and two get lost in what they both give. Good to see you writing again!


  • Sandygram silver member
    September 23, 2007
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    Well Charlie my friend you do have a way with words. This was very beautiful. Does make my mind wander afar. So glad to see you writing again. This was quite lovely and yes what a night it would be for two so in love even if only a dream now. God Bless you. Take care, Sandy