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Growing Up

Such a devastating transformation
The one of a child having to grow up
Of having to take on responsibility

Are you proud of yourselves
Shes not old enough to be grown up yet
Look how much she has changed
She lost the sparkle in her eye
Theres no bounce in her step anymore
Her dancing is lifeless

Watch her set her face to stone
Her way of telling the world she is serious
That she is grown up

"It's time for you to start growing up"
NO ITS NOT

The pressure you put on her to grow up
Broke her
The responsibility was too much
She is doing the best she can
Its time to leave her alone

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something I have noticed throughout this year

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  • Walking Tall
    September 24, 2007

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    growing up too fast is one of the worst things....
    it's not something you can force
    parents and ppl need to learn that
    seej