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Awaiting Our Time

It seems I wait endlessly
for time and space to bring us together
so many reasons for avoidance
to dance alone into distance.

Wistful wanting permeates
as I reach into the wild blue yonder
grasping the air, searching, waiting
for that briefest moment when your star shines close.

Sapphire secrets shine within
in gentle glow awaiting your return
if this is all that time for now allows
my clock will tick in constancy with strength and tenderness

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Prompt - Blue Moon

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    September 26, 2007
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    nice and sweet piece thanks for the entry


  • penman gold member
    September 23, 2007
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    Excellent

    Another beautiful creation. Such incredible images. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    September 23, 2007

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    You do have a way with beautiful imagery you know, I could picture this in my mind, so soft and serene, just what I needed, I think this is well on the way to get you another trophy for that pool room

    Karen