Gray clouds spatter my clear cerulean sky
the second I part from you,
I miss your eyes, miss your laugh, miss your comforting voice
the way you tilt your head and smile to cheer me up
but more than anything, I miss the happiness you bring to my life.
In a list
A contest entry
- Missing / Longing in 5 lines! by Beating.
600 points, ended October 8, 2007, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful
I really like the vivid imagery in the beginning, good job!
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wow. this is just so beautiful in its imagery, I'm really impressed. It's kind of dark... or maybe that's just the background giving that effect. But yeah, very nicely written and just really good!
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Beautiful
Truly great and the picture was a nice touch. Good luck in the contest.
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