steam and steep
melancholy memories,
Ceylonian scent in delicate China;
Grandmaman gently whispers good night-
gentle breath upon my cheek.
Author notes
childhood memories------
A contest entry
- A little prompt by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended September 23, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A lovely memory indeed..smiles
Beautiful piece..
Peace
~A~
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I love this 'grandmaman' instead of the sandman
I lost my grandma this summer, I like how this cup of tea allows the reader to remember the good times, visiting over a cup of tea with grandma - beautiful poem
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this is very tender and beautiful my dear sister what a wonderful, soft memory. best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Ceylon sounds better than Sri Lanka doesn't it, reenie. i like grandmas breath xxx best of luck xxp
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gently whispers good night-
gentle breath upon my cheek.
all I can do is smile wide,and sigh for such memories.
Len
hope all is well with you and yours.
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This is very sweet. Well expressed.
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what can trigger age old memories is astonishing. You have brought to life a piece of self through your words. good luck and well done
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How sweet and sincerely divine. A pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing... x Love and light, Butterflydreams.
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A very beautiful memory. Such tender and wonderful words.
All the best to you
Gaylene
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Awww, how sweet! What a lovely and endearing poem.
It was a pleasure.
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