emotion’s ocean echoed in my tea-cup
like the merry-go-round
of summer song lyrics
infused with pandemonium
and repeated full volume.
In a list
A contest entry
- A little prompt by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended September 23, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
critique welcome.
Comments
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Magnificent!!
Wonderful take on the prompt and the words:
emotion's ocean echoed in my tea-cup
Loved it!!
Powerful visuals...
Congratulations on Your trophy win!!
Thank You for sharing Your Talent too
Best wishes to You
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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WOW! This was sure a gold winner!! Morbid n great imagery! Caught me off guard! Congrats on the win!
luv
pri
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definately gold worthy. its an enigma (for me that is), and because it is - its immortalized ..... like kurtz. Sorry, just had a flash back to haack and heart of darkness hah. Yes yes I'll stop.
You know there's something in 'infused with pandemonium and repeated full volume' that just clicks with me... some unknown element that i love.
congratulations on the win, but more on the crafting of the poem...
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Confusing for sure, but in a good way. I love the way it ends on a cliffhanger, and i want to know more. You have a great vocabulary of metaphors and descriptions. It sounds like your contridicting yourself, with the lines
of summer song lyrics
infused with pandemonium ,
but that could just be me,
Congrats on the gold, and well deserved too.
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lovingly intriguing is as best as I can discribe this poem. The intimate personal nature that infuses the inspiration of what is conveyed, I seem to interpert as a bit sully and cryptive good luck in the contest
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Very creative and truly an intriguing write, quite attention grabbing. Thanks for sharing... x Love and light, Butterflydreams.
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I have been reading some of the entries and I am amazed how many people find memories in that cup of tea
This one reminds me of a winter evening with that cup of tea....and summer anxiously awaited , yet fortunately also remembered. Best wishes in this contest,
reenie
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Wow this is stunning and very deep meaning within.
All the best to you .
Gaylene
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