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Only you make me write cliche

I love to watch you stumble over not to pretty shoes

Keeping rythmic beats on bed heads

and the stomach of the elderly

[only you can get the old men going]

Your more than a nicotine headache doll

Your a miss used aprehension

Of what normal is

and normal does

FUCK ONLY YOU CAN GET ME TO WRITE CLICHE

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  • x-DemolitionLover-x
    September 24, 2007

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    Very Nice Poem!
    I love it! Its like cool! Errr...yeah dolls LOL
    It would be a perfect punk hate song


  • Sandygram silver member
    September 23, 2007

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    Nice write. Thank you for sharing. I think we all know someone like this. Nice imagery. Keep writing!! Take care, Sandy


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    September 23, 2007

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    Great Writing

    Great writing. Keep it up. I really like this.

    All the best
    Wayne