So very special
And wonderful too
Sitting in a cafa'e
Having a spot of tea
With that most
Special someone
Author notes
I hope that you really enjoy this peice of art that I have written for you !
A contest entry
- A little prompt by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended September 23, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you like most about this Poem?
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Sweet, short and filled with imagery. The simple words say a lot and convey meaning within their reading. The delivery and the flow are good carrying a thought to completion within its structure.
This line is poor English and sounds wrong, "And wonderfully too" you need to drop the "ly".
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Even when no one is around, a cup of tea can be rejuvenating or relaxing. I miss the one I used to share with, though, over a cup of Good Earth tea. ~ Karen
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Well this was very short... However very sweet. Did you write it for a contest? Well it was good. ~~Shannon~~
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good
It reminds me of my English friends. Very simple and sweet. I hope you had a strawberry tart with it.
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this reminds me of special moments indeed...and how we get the most pleasure from the most simple things in life[I count a cup of teas as one of life's treasures] and enjoying it with someone special is even better
. Best wishes in the contest,
reenie
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So delicate and real. Thanks for sharing... x Love and light, Butterflydreams.
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Lovely little write you have here... yes there is nothing more special than sharing a moment with your loved one
Karen
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