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Broken Game

Played with too much

thrown against derranged walls

the living lie

yells out-- I recall

 

The days of youth

the 'let me hold your hand'

true love grew slowly

now suddenly banned

 

Help me wake

from an interminable disease

make room for the pain

let me break free.. please

 

Say so long to those wonderful days

of when time didn't go anywhere

memories and fantasies are not around

who knew 1-sided love was so profound

 

Lies.. a key to unleash pain

make the mind play again

in reverse

but now when you lied.. I don't remember when

 

Don't do this to me

my face is below the Earth's crust

why do you do this

is this a must?

 

Why do i question you

when I always get a 'no'

why must you be so cold

why dont you want me to go

 

is it the pulling feeling

like a chain in the chest

it's something I feel

I'll pack my things and go..

 

 

It will be best..

 

 

 

This poem is kinda epic to me.. I hope I get at least 3 or 4 star comments.. and NO SPAM.

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  • MagicaI
    September 23, 2007
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    Bloota Bloota: HAH YOU RULE.