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I Can Land a Plane!

Shukran...

Allah be most praised...

I guided this hunk of metal through
Blades of grass, through faceless skyscrapers

Shukran...

I looked away from a photograph of my family,
Edges burned away by my insipid flying ability,
Long enough to steer this aeroplane
Away from imminent death

And to think I imagined myself
On Gabriel's magic carpet...
I... I'm almost embarrassed...

Shukran...

Thank you, Muhammad...
For showing me the truth:
Hide behind seven veils
Submit to the cause
Marry a widow
Utilize her moneys...

Shukran jazelan.

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If this doesn't get me on some fantastic fatwa death list....

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  • poetryality silver member
    October 9, 2007

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    Yup! I saw your name on a death list in a vision I had before I clicked onto this poem. LMAO

    I'm glad I have Musilm friends so that I knew what "Shukran" meant, especially being that it was the first word in the poem. I don't know why but the title cracks me up. Hahahahaha I come here often looking for my laugh of the day. I think I may have found it here. LOL The satire is brilliant! Um...I hope no one comes to this page that could be in the least bit offended.

    Much Love ♥

    Renee


  • Lute
    September 26, 2007
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    You should be on some death list just on general principles. I mean look what you do to poetry!