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Wake Without You...

Wasn't it just the other day
That I found myself lying there alone next to you
Holding hands as we capture life's uncertainty
But there you were in my imagination
Just another shadow on my wall...

A contest entry

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  • Beating gold member
    October 4, 2007

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    wow. I really like that last line.
    "Just another shadow on my wall..."
    I guess we all like to imagine things that we want. And the shadow makes you see it. I really like that. Great job!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 23, 2007
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    I love the angle you've taken here, nice style. Good luck in the contest!