Nervous energy flows down my spine,
Pooling, twisting in my stomach.
Her tongue works wonders
Across my belly,
Dipping into my navel,
Leaving me in sweet shudders.
Nips leave me moaning
In her arms,
Her mouth controls the
Pitch of my gasps.
She breathes in my energy
Like an elixir of life,
Making me starve for more.
More of her.
Nails trail down my sides
And rest, digging, in my hips.
Sweet pain, deadly ecstasy,
I'm not sure I'll ever breathe again.
Her love has got my blood pumping,
Heated, through my veins.
Flushed against her soft curves,
I find myself begging for more.
Fingers slip a little lower,
Going for my prize.
She wants to make my breathing stop,
Make me live just for her.
She's my poison,
And I love every drop she puts into me.
She may be my downfall
But her loving is a slow poison
I'm all too happy to take,
And as long as I dig my nails into her back,
My life is her's.
Her fingers find that perfect place,
She looks at me with love,
Perfection held behind blue eyes,
The last thing I see,
What I hold in my mind,
As fireworks take over.
Author notes
Ummm...yeah.
'it's empty tonight'.
First attempt at erotica...
A contest entry
- Gay & Lesbian Erotica! by SinningSaint.
355 points, ended September 29, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I adored this piece. For the first time at erotic writing, I felt you di da marvelous job. It was so beautiful, but so sexy at the same time. Amazing job, please keep writing, and thank you for entering!
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So is it sad I'm jealous of whoever the "poison" is? Lol.
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yeah that is kinda sad actually. Should I be jealous of whomever you're using your "jazz tongue" on? LOL.
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Touche, haha.
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LOL. Now that we've got that covered...
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We do?
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Is there more to cover, since there's nothing to be jealous of?
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I guess not, but you killed the conversation.
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Sorry. Didn't know what else to say.
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Well, who is ol' Blue Eyes?
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Hmm...could be anyone. I just like blue eyes. Could be my own damn reflection, lol.
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Miseriacest.
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Gioia likey? LOL.
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I forgot to add the clapping smiley thingers.


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Eeek. I like it.
Gi.
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