I'm laying in the middle of what I think is woods
It's dark and I don't know how I got here
There's blood all around me
My clothes have been ripped
I'm trying to scream
But I can't
It so cold and it's starting to rain
My legs are numb
I can't move at all
I pray to GOD.
I don't think he hears my soul crying out
I see lights
I hear my name being yelled
I try to make a sound
It doesn't work
I see the light go over me
Where are they going?
I'm right here
No one sees me
No one hears me
No one knows
I don't even know
What happend
How do I get out of here
What do I do
Just lay here and die
Author notes
Something that just came out of my head
A contest entry
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307 points, ended October 18, 2007, 20 entries
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Comments
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Wow. This one is really good.
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this was scary but, it didn't frighten me. well done poem though!
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Thats a scary image. I saw every bit of it too. If that was me lying there I don't know what I'd do either. I know I haven't said much in this but I liked it, nice imagery. (Thought I'd leave a harsh comment? Yeah I can't. Honesty doesn't have to be harsh, doesn't fit me) Well thanks for your entry
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