so he smiles..
and i laugh..
and he says..
and i say..
and he sighs..
and i blush..
and he holds
my hand.
so i beam..
and he shivers..
and i smile..
and he lowers
his eyes.
so i stand..
and he follows..
and i walk..
and he leads..
and i spin..
and he laughs..
and i stop..
and he stops...
and i breathe..
then i dont.
and he reaches..
and i let him..
and we kiss
goodnight.
Author notes
the breathlessness and the rush of a first date.
Please tell me what you think
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me like...yea!!! Donna's stamp of approval (I love saying that hehe) Funny thing, I have yet to expiernce he whole first date thing...even though I had a boyfriend. hehe well I'll get my chance and hopefully it'll be Andrew
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Quite nice
I like how you use the dot-dot-dots to have people's imaginations run; it's like you give it a sort of personalization for them!
What's also cool is no matter what they think about; it seems to go into the next line. Whee!
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a very cute piece which ties up a whole night of bliss without having to actually write it!!!
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That's so sweet. It definitely carries the excitement of a first date.
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