Dreams of periwinkle
bubbling tranquility
Aqua beaches
Temperate paradise
Cerulean sky at dawn
Calling the earth awake
Navy nights
Of passionate bliss
Azure eyes
Daring you to fall for him
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Colours by Beating.
300 points, ended October 8, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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"Cerulean sky at dawn
Calling the earth awake"
I love those lines. This piece is just screaming about true harmony in the colours of life. Truly. I felt really calm while reading this, and I like how end it at an almost vulnerable place. Great job! -
This is good, its got some real power in it, especially the lines
"Cerulean sky at dawn
Calling the earth awake"
It put lots of different images in my mind, so good job. Good luck in the contest!
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