watching winter die
delighting in melted snow
sounds of spring rebounds
the cocoon now stirs
renew nature's tapestry
rhythmic springtime dance
intermittent hues
replenish smiles once more
over the rainbow
ribbons of colours
nature arching its beauty
heavens creation
after the rainstorm
watch nature burst into song
bluebirds sing their tune
In a list
A contest entry
- Haiku Contest by misticmoonlite.
675 points, ended September 24, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful suite
and wonderful words to boot...I loved this one best
ribbons of colours
nature arching its beauty
heavens creation
might want to change its to it's
beautiful write hun
Mal
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Hello, So nice to hear from you. Thank you for the nice comment. Always a pleasure when you stop by. You take care, Sandy
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Superb/Inspirational
Excellant write indeed. I love the variety of Haiku's you used to describe the photo. Very well done indeed, no doubt about it.
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Your comment was very nice and most appreciated. You take care, Sandy
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Great imagery and great Haiku
Best of luck to you in the contest though I don't think you will need my luck
Love and Light.
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Hello Tearz, So nice to read your lovely comment. Thank you for stopping by. Take care, Sandy
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quoting you;
'after the rainstorm
watch nature burst into song
bluebirds sing their tune'....
like that last one the most.....
thank you for the morning read....
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Thank you my friend. So glad you enjoyed. I liked the last stanza too. I love bluebirds. They remind me of happiness. Nice to hear from you. Take care, Sandy
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Aw, lovely, Sandy, perfectly flowing haikus, which merge into a quite beautiful piece, and you've done them all 5-7-5 too! well done my friend,
good luck in the contest,
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Hello there Alex. Thank you for this most lovely comment. Coming from you this is an honor. The master of short poetry himself!!! Woo Hoo.
Thank you so much my dear friend. You take care, Sandy
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pretty
the vision that flows through ones mind is awesome beauty, thank you for sharing,entering our contest,good luck...mm
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wonderfull love
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Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem. I appreciate your comment. Take care, Sandy
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You make it hard
To face winter and it all but upon us.. shame on you for the cold winds will soon blow. Burrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr...mac
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Awe here is some sunshine to warm you mac. I didn't mean to make you so cold. . Thank you for stopping by. Always a pleasure and a smile. You take care, Sandy
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Very beautiful haiku chain, that has so many lovely images within it. The use of colors, rainbows, and hues add enrichment to the flowing images within.
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I appreciate you stopping by and reading. Great comment!!!! You take care, Sandy
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