Quietly sprouting
flowers grow along the walk
arrival of Spring
Sweltering heat wave
lakes and rivers full of life
Summer at it's peak
Bountiful harvest
fruits of our labor returned
Autumn's homecoming
Silently falling
snow drifts to window ledges
announcing Winter
Author notes
I'm not very efficient in Haiku either...need critique!
A contest entry
- Haiku Contest by misticmoonlite.
675 points, ended September 24, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Well, I'm not very efficient at any form. However, your title doesn't seem to need an apostrophe. As a haiku, it's very very nice. As for my taste, I wasn't awed. Nonetheless, you accomplished your goal well. Maybe some haiku expert will give you a better comment.
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Quite good
the seasons change and wildlife is flocking,the weather changes from calm to bitterness,good job,good luckin our contest..MM
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