When my nights grow cold,
it's in your arms I wish to be.
And when all I feel is darkness,
it's your light I want to see.
When you need that touch,
I'll be the wind upon your cheek.
I'll be the lasting memories,
that in your heart, you seek.
I'll be your setting sun,
your moon and your stars;
to bring your life new hope
and soothe your painful scars.
I'll breathe the air you breathe,
because I want to be with you.
I'll say it from my heart,
though you may not feel it too.
Author notes
Prompt: I want to be with you
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A contest entry
- Love poems wanted by rosepoet.
300 points, ended September 25, 2007, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A very mature, as well as beautifully written piece.
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This is amazing, I love how you wrote this. Keep up the good work, and good luck in the contest.
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oh this is so sweet. You see I just love this poem. it speaks volumes. It's perfect, it doesn't have this childish thing about how you left me and how I feel.
keep the ink flowing good luck in the contest
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