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covered in "love"

covered in love, i
weave right up to, you
gaining my ground, with
each stag'ring step

slink through the bars, of
your sordid lies, and
twisted affairs, you
get thoroughwhelmed

slip out my fangs and
cut through the night
just like your needle
you feel my bite

sick of the words and
hollow love you's
som'uh'thing tells me
you're in it to lose

hollow me o,ver
you got no cause, so
i can't stay o,ver
it's no big loss

roll us togeth, er
thrashing in your, mind
mulling it o,ver
just for the night

slip out my fangs and
into your side
a bite on the neck
a small pay for the ride

Author notes

inspiration in the form of Dead or Alive 4
there's a cinematic where this chick kills a guy with a sowing needle through the back of his neck

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  • draagyn
    September 29, 2007

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    "thoroughwhelmed" is an interesting word . . . lol. ah, i see hesitation.. cool. fun fun. im tired, sry it's so shrt.