Spiritual and melancholy
Two words used to describe who I am.
Who I am, is not who I wish to be.
I find I do not believe there is more out there.
Life has not been kind to me.
No, instead all has been harsh and unfeeling.
Selfish and powerless I sit waiting for naught, but my death.
All is consumed by resentment and anger.
If I could be who I wish to be, life would just interfere.
Please tell me what you think
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Sad! D: Its good, but makes me depressed when reading it. Do you really feel like that??? I hope not! Love you mom! This is another great write!
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I have to say this one was incredible. You really put ur emotions into it and I loved it.
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this has a shakespear feel to it which is way awesome. i was trying to think of a title but for this i think the title has to be just perfect ya know. not something to be rushed because thats kinda what people go off of when deciding on whether or not to read it. and this poem is most deffinatly worth reading. i really like it theres a lot of emotion in it and the background goes with it really well. good job
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