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an obscure moment
shadowed intention
a foreshadowed comment
in a self made prison
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a grim discovery
breed of isolation
with a very
cruel deception
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subtle poison flows
through your veins
and all you know
is in vain
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and while you clutch
that presence close
its a poison touch
that you chose
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a clever secret
veiled in lies
a rain that's let
you try
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but you can't and you fail
lost in this 'zone'
this vivid wail
is an end your own
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Author notes
"Blissful Poison Faerie Nymph"
This is an odd and very abstract, but i hope you like it anyway. Word bank one.
In a list
A contest entry
- A distant melody-many options by Coco Mara.
600 points, ended October 23, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank you for fallowing the rules completely. I love your entry and I like how you pieced all of the words together in the poem.
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Thanks
I'm glad you liked it, it took a while, but I finally finished it. Thanks for the kewl contest. Good luck judging it.
jan
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