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Forever and for Always.

I've been blind,
oblivious to it all.
And when our eyes met,
I knew soon that I would fall.

My heart was beating for you
faster than ever.
Especially on that memorable day.
When my voice was caught in my throat,
yearning to say those three words.

I.

Love.

You.

How did I fall for you so quickly?
Your eyes lured me in
hiding all of your secrets.
Though you stayed completely mysterious.
Pulling me in wanting to know you more.

And your smile...
lights up any room and in some cases lifes...like mine.

And that laugh of yours...
makes my heart flutter.

In the depths of my heart my love for you can be found.
Forever and for Always.

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Prompt number 3.

A contest entry

Love me forever?

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  • Androgyneric
    September 22, 2007

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    This is really good! I love the part,
    "I.
    Love.
    You."
    It, for some reason, struck a chord inside me. Perhaps its the bluntness of your affection towards this person that made me smile slightly...

    *~akari~*